Film: How should my audience respond

How should my audience respond (In keywords) :

• Amazed
• Understanding
• Make their own ending conclusions
• Know the genre automatically
• Hypnotised
• Feel tension
• Wary of technology in the future
• Visually stunned
• Feel better (about the world they live in)
• Feel like they just came from a rollercoaster ride

What I feel will be my audience's reaction (From a visually entrancing piece of film, with narratvie that will access your deepest imaginations).

Summary of my Plot Narrative (version 1): In a world that is aware of parallel universes, it fails to remain stable with its advancement in technology, that's slightly ahead of our own. A man named Jonathan Standon, is part of a new cult that remains pure of body augmentations. These augmentations all have the capabilities to connect to advanced super computers worldwide. As he tries to live, his now, dangerous life, he encounters something so unthinkable, it threatens his life, and the lives of billions of others.

Possible quote: Computers live, life shuts down.

         Feedback:

• Very imaginative
• Not a plot summary, reads like an advertisement
• Does not tell anyone the beginning, middle, and an end
• It doesn't work as a plot summary
• Conclusion needed

Summary of my Plot Narrative (version 2): Jonathan Standon, a young adult, and a rebel of his time, struggles to live in a world that has advancement in bio-technology, which enhances all sentient life. He doesn't have any implants, as is told from the restricitons of his religion. Jonathan lives in Norwich, United Kingdom, as he believes it is a slow paced town, with less technological advancement, which provides a natural safe haven. However, Jonathan encounters something unthinkable in his path, that has the power to destroy all life, across the universe, and the next infinite universes.

Both my inspirations and other products what my film will be similar to are of: cyberpunk, Neo-world films, books and games.

• Deus Ex Human Revolution is biggest inspiration for my film. Based on a popular videogame. Deus Ex places a character named Adam as a security specialist of a global organisation which supplies the disfigured with augmentations. And as there are now prosphetics to improve people's lifestyles, they also change the people, by allowing them to be stronger, move faster, and even land 1000 foot drops from the sky, unharmed.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vK4k_Ieh8Wg - A preview trailer of the game, and how I aim for my film to be similar to.

• Blade Runner is one of the most talked about Sci-Fi film's to date. Also the Director Ridley Scott, whom is repeatedly mentnoned when describing the genre and is one of the most praised movie makers of our time. Set in the year 2019, retired police officer Rick begins hunting a replicant of a human, whom is now attempting to lengthen his existence.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s9F0bwZXdeY - A trailer presenting the film, remastered for DVD release with high definition.

• Next is a book that teels the story of bio-engineering, and greedy corporations who attempt to gain control over everything. A character named Frank Burnet has a form of leukemia and recieved treatment from a Doctor, whom of which performed new surgery techniques on his patient. Afterwards, he sues the university for misuse of his cells. And the battle of corporations commences.

If my audiences enjoy all of these products, or at least some of these. They would most likely enjoy my short film, as it follows similar guidelines of these concepts.