Last Man on Earth (Storyboard)

The link below is located as the source of the short-film 'Last Man on Earth':

http://www.bbc.co.uk/filmnetwork/films/p00pf28k

And below is my self-generated interpretation of the storyboard for the short-film:

I wanted to compare ideas between this short-film and the concept of my own. As critics and reviews for 'Last Man on Earth' are more than good, I have decided to share the narrative structure between the two, but, as for my generated idea, I will differ to extraordinary lengths to make them obvious in a difference.